Feedback From Latest Pitch

In our latest pitch to Luke,  he told us that he thinks it would be a good idea if when we show our sequence, we show two of our clips at the same time in non chronological order.

 This way of showing our clips can make the audience members feel quite disturbed because it isn't done in a general order and may confuse them but this will in-turn create tension for them.






As for our titles, depending on the placement of the videos we will only place them when there is a video showing or as it goes off the screen.

Luke liked our pitch but he wants to see a storyboard and shot list and as we are doing two videos on the screen at the same time we will need to double up on how many shots we take so we will probably be taking between 30-60 shots. This will give us more room to work with and we will be able to tell a better story.